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雅思九分转载 Simon's 'foreign films' essay

2015-11-01 
雅思九分转载 Simon's 'foreign films' essay

  雅思作文开头2句话 (外教Simon)

  谢振礼转载 ielts-simon.com

  20150624 博客范文:外国影片的优势

  Many people prefer to watch foreign films rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should governments give financial support to local film industries?

  Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

  Simon's model essay:

  开头2句话--(起承转合 2-5-5-1 全文13句话)

  It is true that foreign films are more popular in many countries than domestically produced films. There could be several reasons why this is the case, and I believe that governments should promote local film-making by subsidising the industry.

  There are various reasons why many people find foreign films more enjoyable than the films produced in their own countries. Firstly, the established film industries in certain countries have hugh budgets for action, special effects and to shoot scenes in spectacular locations. Hollywood blockbusters like 'Avatar' or the James Bond films are examples of such productions, and their global appeal is undeniable. Another reason why these big-budget films are so successful is that they often star the most famous actors and actresses, and they are made by the most accomplished producers and directors. The poor-quality, low-budget filmmaking in many countries suffers in comparison.

  In my view, governments should support local film industries financially. In every country, there many be amateur film-makers who just need to be given the opportunity to prove themselves. To compete with big-budget productions from overseas, these people need money to pay for film crews, actors and a host of other costs related to producing high-quality films. If governments did help with these costs, they would see an increase in employment in the film industry, income from film sales, and perhaps even a rise in tourist numbers. New Zealand, for example, has seen an increase in tourism related to the 'Lord of the Rings' films, which were partly funded by government subsidies.

  In conclusion, I believe that increased financial support could help to raise the quality of locally made films and allow them to compete with the foreign productions that currently dominate the market. (294 words, band 9)

  以下举例Simon老师的introduction。(来源ielts-simon.com 不代表谢振礼的思维模版。)

  引言至少写两句话。外教简易模版。参考用,未必适合你。

  第一句话--问题背景。

  It is true that ......

  第二句话--表达立场。

  While..........., personally, I agree (disagree) with the idea that ......

  》另外一套引言模板 (两句话):

  第一句

  Many people have different views about whether ......

  第二句

  Although there are several advantages to ......., I would argue that .........

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  雅思范文开头(simon)

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