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2011年考研英语写作高分:结构科学内容充实(1)

2010-12-31 
第一句对画面的简单概括,第二三句描写画面内容,最后一句点明中心,即象征或寓意(这句也可以放在第二段第一句:承上启下)

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  2.2 三段分别覆盖情况:

  首段三种:图画描述、现象描述、寓意象征(可以在第二段)

  中心段三种:原因分析、利弊分析、举例说明

  尾段三种:判断评论&问题建议、个人选择、现实运用

  2.3 详细解析

  2.3.1 图画描述

  四句:第一句对画面的简单概括,第二三句描写画面内容,最后一句点明中心,即象征或寓意(这句也可以放在第二段第一句:承上启下)

  图画描述段的首尾句常用有:

  (1)

  A:一幅图首句:

  ※This is an interesting and thought-provoking picture。(extraordinary /meaningful)

  ※ As is shown in the picture, (depicted/conveyed/drawn/illustrated)

  ※ The picture shocks us beyond description。(reveals only the tip of an ugly iceberg。用于反面意义图画)

  B:一幅图尾句

  ※ The meaning conveyed by the picture is clear but profound:揭示中心(drawing/photo)

  ※ It is obvious that…揭示中心

  ※ Obviously… 揭示中心

  (2)

  A:两幅图首句

  ※ The two pictures are interesting and thought-provoking。(extraordinary/meaningful)

  ※ As is shown in the first picture. 第一幅图描述 whereas the second picture depicts…第二幅图描述(depicted/conveyed/drawn)

  ※ As depicted in the pictures…第一幅图描述 and 第二幅图描述

  ※ As we can see from the first picture…第一幅描述,in the second picture,however…第二幅图描述

  ※ The two pictures reveal a not uncommon phenomenon that…总结画面图像

  B:两幅图尾句

  ※ Comparing the two pictures,we can conclude that…揭示中心

  ※ The meaning conveyed by the pictures is clear but profound:揭示中心(drawing/photo)

  ※ It is obvious that…揭示中心

  ※ Obviously…揭示中心

  ※ It is not difficult to conclude the symbolic meaning of the pictures…揭示中心

  2.3.2 现象简介

  四句:第一句是对相关现状的概括介绍,第二三句进一步细节介绍,最后一句点明主题,可能带来的后果。

  现象简介段常用首尾句:

  A:首句(开门见山说现象)

  It is really common that .。。介绍现象(有图说图,没图说事)

  It is not uncommon that.。。介绍现象(有图说图,没图说事)

  The drawing reflects the common phenomenon of…名词性现象描述

  Recently,there has been a growing concern among the public over the issue/phenomenon that…介绍现象(有图说图,没图说事)(Today/Nowadays)

  Lately,the discussion of…(现象)has aroused nationwide attention among the public。

  B;尾句

  The meaning conveyed by the phenomenon is clear but profound :揭示中心…(revealed/implied)

  The profound implication of the phenomenon is that…揭示中心

  Therefore,it is obvious that…揭示中心

  Obviously…揭示中心

  2.3.3 寓意象征

  四句:第一句对画面的简要评价,第二三句对画面简单描述,第四句得出结论,揭示主题。

  如果出现在第二段就在第二三句进行拓展。

  寓意象征段常用首尾句

  A:首句

  As can be seen form the picture,the drawer tells us that…说出画面的寓意(cartoon/photo)

  What the picture illustrates is a profound topic in our daily life which often causes our concern…说出画面的寓意

  It is not a difficult job for us to make clear the meaning of the picture…说出寓意

  B;尾句

  Therefore,…说出深层寓意(广泛的)

  The majority of people would agree that…你的结论。

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