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2013年英语四级真题作文解析及范文指导二

2013-06-21 
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  英语四级作文真题:

  对白:

  子:Dad, I'm a bit worried about disposing of nuclear waste(处理核废料)

  父:If you can empty the dustbin(垃圾筒) here, you can do anything

  Directions:

  For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of doing small things before undertaking something big. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  点评:

  图画的内容和构图不难:父亲和男孩子的对话,孩子说“ Dad,I am a bit worried about disposing ofnuclear weapon. (爸爸,我有点担心清除核武器这个问题)”,父亲则回答“ If you can empty the dustbin, you can doanything. (如果你能把垃圾桶倒掉,你就能坐好任何事情)” ,说话间,手指着垃圾桶。

  这幅图画和2012年6月的六级漫画作文非常相似,当时的图中,也是两人对话,女儿和父亲。父亲问女儿:“ Hi, sweetie, how was your school today ? (嘿,小甜心,你在今天在学校过得怎么样?)” 女儿非常冷漠的回答:“Dad,youcan read all about it on my blogs. (爹哋,你自己可以在我的博客上读到所有内容)”,然后呢,女儿拔腿出门,留下父亲一脸惊愕。

  说回这个四级的作文题。

  作文的第一段,要进行简单描绘图画内容,这是必须的,也是题目中强制要求的(a brief description of the picture)。描述的时候,只要把父子两的对话移植到第一段,然后把父亲手指垃圾桶的动作描绘一下就可以了,非常简单。

  作文的第二段,进行主旨提炼并且论述。这幅图画很容易看出主题,那就是做大事之前,要先做小事(一屋不扫,何以扫天下),而且题目中其实早就已经透露了主题了 (express your views on the importance ofdoing small things before undertaking something big.)因此,第二段通篇论述小事做起的重要性就可以了。属于我在课堂上讲过的作文三大分类之“积极主题,论述意义”

  作文第三段,总结。这一段再次强调小事做起的意义,我们不能低估他的威力。文章最后可以以名人名言作为结尾。

  范文:

  We can see from the cartoon that there is a father talking with his son. Havingheard his son’s words that “ Dad, I am a bit worried about disposing of nuclearweapon.” The father replies that “ If you can empty the dustbin here, you cando anything” and points the garbage can beside him.

  Funny and common as the conversation sounds, it reflects that the father intends to advise his son to do small things beforeundertaking big. Definitely, doing small things is the first step of success and will lay root for doing something big. By doing something small, we are able to accumulate experience, master skills and train ourselves to be more patient. In other words, we can be well prepared for further challenges in the course of fulfilling small things. By contrast, those who desire to do something big at once will constantly be haunted by disappointment, frustrations or even failures, as with opportunities-“something big”- showing up , they can hardly seize them because of the lack of experience and confidence stems from doing small things. Taking the picture presented above as a case in point, how can the little boy succeed in disposing of nuclear weapons if he even doesn’t know how to empty the dustbin?

  From my perspective, under no circumstances should we undervalue the power of doing small things. Instead, we should regard small things as the source of experience, skills and the prerequisite of success. “Great achievement only belongs to those who can do small things perfectly.” Aristotle also used to say.

  范文译文:

  如图所示,我们可以看见有一位父亲正在和他的儿子聊天。当父亲听到儿子说:“ 爸爸,我有点担心如何处理核武器这个问题” 的时候,父亲指着身边的垃圾桶,并且回答道:“ 如果你可以把垃圾桶倒掉,你就可以做到任何事情”。

  尽管这段父子对话听起来滑稽、普通,然而他折射出父亲的意图,想劝告儿子在做大事之前,要先做好小事。很明显,做好小事情是成功的第一步,并且能为将来的大事情打下基础。通过做小事情,我们可以积累经验,掌握技能,并且让我们自己变得更加具有耐心。换句话说,我们可以在做小事情的过程中,为将来的大事情做好充分准备。相反的,哪些想要一上来就做大事情的人,通常会遭受失望、挫折甚至是失败,因为当机会这些“大事情”出现的时候,这部分人基本无法抓住机会,因为他们缺少源自于做小事过程当中的经验和自信。以所给的这幅图画为例,如果这个男孩都不知道如何倾倒垃圾桶,他怎么可能做成功处理核武器这样的大事呢?

  在我看来,任何时候我们都不应该轻视做小事的威力。取而代之的是,我们应该将小事情视为经验、技能的源泉,和成功的先决条件。亚里士多德也曾经说过:“ 伟大的成就,只属于那些能够将小事情做到完美的人”。

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