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高分作文造句原则D

2008-12-08 
有关作文。
  句子的统一指的是一个句子只表示一个完整的中心思想,它不包含与此中心思想无关的部分。而且,句子的各部分之间的关系必须是清楚而又符合逻辑的。

  例如:Different people have different addiction to (preferences for) books. They read different books just to meet their different needs. Because different people have different needs to read the different kinds of books. From this we can also see that different people have different intentions and notions. So they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.

  这段话语言混乱,杂乱无章,句子之间没有明确的衔接,我们可以这样修改:

 Different people have different preferences for books. Different people read the different kinds of books, because different people have different intentions and notions just as they choose the different things to meet their needs in every facet in life.
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