高分作文造句原则A
有关作文。
句子的变化性指的是同一种意义可以通过各种变化的句型来表达。一篇文章要使人觉得内容丰富,语言生动有力,就应交叉使用长句、短句、简单句、复合句、并列句等,达到形式与内容的统一。英语短文的写作要重视句型的不同变化。使用不同的句型,可以使文章更生动、更富有生气! 例如:
●简单句型的转换
原句:Seattle is a garden city, with one of the most delightful climates in the world.
优化1:A garden city, with one of the most delightful climates in the world, is Seattle.
优化2:Seattle, a garden city, has one of the most delightful climates in the world.
原句:She knew English very well.
优化:She had a good command of English.
●复杂句型的转换
原句:They struggled forward. They were exhausted. Their steps were dragging. They had to push on.
优化:Exhausted, they struggled forward, their steps dragging, but they had to push on.
原句:Nothing here indicates where this information came from.
优化:There is no indication where this information came from