PETS 辅导（写作）2级
1、写作要求
1） 时间 30m 2) 题量 1 25 points
3) 题型 应用文（信件、便条、介绍等）、图表、图画、提纲等
4） 问题 硬伤、内伤
5） 注意事项：内容、语言、格式、组织、variety
2、写作课的目的
1）20 题目 2）100 词和词组 3）常用句型
3、写作部分的评分标准
1、内容 2、语言 3、字数
内容：否切题，思想是否清楚，意义是否连贯；
语言：句型及词语是否准确，表达是否有误等。
example：
july 12, 2004
dear li
how are things going at your school? it was really exciting to get your greeting card last week.
how will you spend your summer holiday? our holiday has started. i will take an english writing class for the first two weeks here. and then i will travel with my two classmates to xiaan for sightseeing. on july 30, i will take a train back home in guangdong.
i hope i will see you in three weeks if you dont plan to travel out of guangdong. i really want to talk to you about school life and our study then.
looking forward to meeting you soon.
yours truly
liu ping
1. writing exercise:
假如你校来了几位美国外宾，你带他们参观图书馆，请就以下内容拟一份80－100词的口头介绍。
内容：
1）有藏书5万册，分为小说、科普、文学、历史等，多数为中文本。
2）学生一次可以借两本书，两周后归还，若到期还可以续借。
3）图书馆内有一间大阅览室，有报纸和杂志，但不能带走。
2. writing exercise:
王平的爷爷得了重病。王平的母亲和父亲在外地出差。请根据这一情况用英文向李老师写一张便条（请假条）请假两天，照顾爷爷。便条约80－100词。
3. writing exercise:
英国jackson教授应邀来校做报告。请用80词左右写一篇简短的欢迎词。内容要点如下：
1） 邀请jackson教授来做报告非常高兴。
2） 报告主要介绍美国的历史
3） 代表学校表示欢迎
4） 介绍jackson教授的成就等
writing exercise:
may i have your attention, please? i have an announcement to make. the school union is going to hold a party on friday evening, october 10 to welcome our friends from the us. the party will be held in the meeting room the 10 th floor in the teaching building. it’ll begin at 7:00 p.m. at the party we’ll have music, dancing, singing and games. american friends will perform some nice programs in the party. everyone is welcome. please come on time.
thank you.
请用英文写一个通知发言。内容包括：初三（1）班将组织到颐和园春游。告诉同学具体日期和时间，在什么地方集合；自带中午饭。有登山和划船等活动。下午返回。
4. writing exercise:
给美国的朋友peter写一封短信。内容包括：
1）欢迎他下周来中国访问你们学校
2）介绍一下你们学校的情况
3）介绍一下你们的学习和生活情况
5. writing exercise:
假定你是张敏（或王滨）。你的英国朋友tom要来中国旅游。给他写封短信，问他什么时候到，要呆多久，打算去哪些地方参观，并向他推荐一处旅游景点。
6. writing exercise:
《21世纪报》中学生版开辟了一个新栏目，帮助大家交笔友（make pen pals）。 写一份简短的自我介绍寄给该版编辑。（80词以上）
7. writing exercise:
假定你是高中生吴鸣，经常收听音乐节目。请你给easy fm的节目主持人maji写一封信。告诉她你很喜欢这个节目，经常收听，并且从英语歌曲中学到了很多的东西。最后请他为你播放歌曲“try to remember”。 (80词以上)
8. writing exercise:
假设你是吴林。昨天是星期日，你和几个同学去了一个农场。请根据下列图画用英语写一篇日记。
9. writing exercise:
请根据下列图画编写一个小故事，描述图中所发生的事情，字数在80－100词左右。
10. writing exercise:
根据下面的图，用英文介绍一下你们学校的布局。（80－10词）
11. writing exercises:
write a letter to your schoolmate, wang yin. try to include the following:
1) 欢迎到你这里来度假
2) 对度假提出建议
3) 注意事项
12. writing exercise:
write a letter about the canteen service to the president.
1) 食堂的状况 （环境、价格、服务等）
2) 可是表扬，也可以是批评
13. writing exercise:
write a letter to your former teacher about your study in the school.
14. writing exercise:
write a letter to the principal about traffic on campus
about bp beepers
about copying homework
about food wastes of food, electricity and water
15. writing exercise:
朋友信件
dear wang pin:
it is very nice to write to you. i believe that everything goes on well with you.
i am writing just to ask if you could do us a favor. we plan to take pets 2 this summer, and we know that you have passed it very easily. can you tell us about your experience and also recommend some necessary books and skills for that test?
we will appreciate it very much if you can write us back soon.
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
yours
li pin
16. writing exercise:
now try to answer this letter and talk about your personal experience in taking pets 2 . (回信)
17. directions: study the following cartoon and write a short essay in about 120 words. your essay should meet the requirements below:
1. describe the picture.
2. write about the message conveyed by the cartoon.
3. give your comments.
suggested words and phrases:
beeper common, affect, on campus, professor and student, ban, regulation
应用文写作
1、书信
a信封的格式
在信封正面的中间略偏右的地方写收信人的地址，注意要先写收信人的姓名，再从小到大写上收信人的地址，寄信人的地址则按从小到大的顺序写在信封的左上角，或者是写在信封的背面。
在收信人名称之前，应冠以尊称，例如：
（1） mr.（mister），用于无职衔的男子。
（2） mrs. ( mistress）。用于已婚女子。
（3） miss，用于未婚女子。
（4） misses（miss的复数），用于复数未婚女子。
（5）dr·（doctor），用于博士。
（6）pro.（professor），用于大学教授。
（7）ms. 用于女士通称。
b*信头（heading）：发信人的地址和发信日期，写在信纸的右上角，距信纸的顶头约一英寸；先写地址后写日期。地址按门牌号码---街名---城市---国名等由小到大的顺序书写；日期可按日---月---年的顺序或月---日---年的顺序写。
*信内地址：收信人的姓名和地址，写在信纸的左上角，低于信头最后一行。
*称呼（greeting）：收信人的称呼，写在信纸的左边，低于信内地址。
dear madam： 亲爱的女士：
dear sir： 亲爱的先生：
dear sirs： 亲爱的先生们：
my dear madam： 亲爱的女士：
my dear sir： 亲爱的先生
正文（body）：信的内容，从左向右横写，低于称呼语，常在缩进四、五个字母处起笔。
*结束语（closing）：发信人表示自己对收信人的一种客套称呼，写在书信正文结尾下面低两行的位置上。一般它均从正中或偏右处写起。结束语的第一个字母必须大写，后面须加上逗号。收信人与写信人之间是朋友关系时常用： yours， yours ever， sincerely yours，等。
*签名（signature）：发信人自己的姓名，写在结束语的下面一行。可与结束语齐头或略向右靠一点儿。
题目：假如你是一个即将毕业的高三学生，在毕业前要为你的老师写感谢信，在信中你应提到自己在学校生活中的感受收获，这个老师给留的最深刻的印象以及你的感激。80-100字
sample
007 middle school
june 8, 2003
mr wang
007 middle school
dear mr. wang,
do you remember the boy who broke the blackboard two years ago? a few weeks later, i will leave the school and you for a further study in the college. at this moment i want to say thank you again to you.
during the three years here, i learned a lot. i learned not only the knowledge but also a useful man to the society. i will never forget that its you that helped me to build my confidence when i met with difficulties in my study. at that time, i was poor in academics and manners. one day, when i felt depressed, i broke the blackboard. you came to talk with me. you told me that a real man never disturbs others or destroys public property just BECause he feels unhappy. tears followed down my checks. then you helped me design a study plan and improve my study habits.
now, im going to leave. ill remember you and yoru words and keep studying.
yours sincerely
linling
2、假条
假设你在一家销售公司工作，业余时间参加英语口语培训，但下周的培训你无法参加，因为经理派你出差。你准备写一张给外籍教师dick的假条。假条中你要说明不能上课的具体原因，请谅解，并希望dick帮你录下当天上课的内容，回来听。字数 80-100
假条格式比书信要简单，只需要称呼和落款、日期就可以了。
january 26, 2003
dear john,
i would like to apply for an annual leave for 3 days from tomorrow.
because i would like to go back to my hometown for my sole brothers wedding on january 28th.
im looking forward to your kind answer.
your sincerely,
linlin
3 通知
通 知
a：书信形式的通知
dear examinee:
as you know, due to unfortunate circumstances, ets was forced to cancel the scores of the octorber 1992 toefl administration in the peoples republic of china. at that time, you were notified that you would be able to take another toefl without charge up through the october 1993 administration. you should be aware that the toefl program has a long standing policy of not refunding test fees when administrations are cancelled.
we apologize for any inconvenience that this may cause to you.
russell webster
executive director
toefl program
educational testing service
诸考生：
如你所知，很遗憾，教育考试服务处被迫取消1992年10月在中华人民共和国进行的托福考试成绩，当时，我方通知你直至1993年10月止，可免费参加在此期间的任何一次考试。你本应知道托福考试项目有一条长期有效的政策：当考试被取消时，之后的一次考试不再收取费用。?
因此带给您的不便，深表歉意。
教育考试服务处，托福考试项目执行主任：
拉塞尔;韦伯斯特（签字）
4 简历
如何写英文简历
英文简历的格式结构括页眉部分、教育背景、工作经历和个人资料四部分。
*页眉部分
1）名字，名字有7种写法：
例如秦方： 1) qin fang 2) fang qin
标准的、外资公司流行的简历中的名字写法，则是第二种，qin fang。
有人用粤语拼写自己的姓氏。比如，王写成wong，李写成lee。这只是香港人的拼法，并不是国际的拼法。 另外，有一小部分人用外国人的姓，如mary smith，这是非常不可取的。因为如果你用外国人的姓，别人会认为你是外国人，或者你父亲是外国人，或者你嫁给了外国人。
双字名，也有四种写法，例： 1）xiao-feng 2）xiao-feng 3）xiaofeng 4）xiao feng，列出四种来，我们建议用第三种，xiaofeng，最简单方便。大家一看就知是名而不是姓，要不然，大家有可能会误认为你是姓肖的。
2）地址
北京以后要写中国，但不必用prc等，因为用china简单清楚。邮编的标准写法是放在省市名与国名之间，起码放在china之前，因为是中国境内的邮编。
3）电话
ⅰ 前面一定加地区号，如（86-10）。因为你是在向外国公司求职，你的简历很可能被传真到伦敦、纽约，大家不知道你的地区号，也没有时间去查。另外，国外很流行user friendly，即想尽办法给对方创造便利，尤其是在找工作时，更要加深这一意识。
ⅱ 8个号码之间加一个-，如6505-2266。这样，认读拨打起来比较容易，否则，第一次打可能会看错位。
ⅲ 区号后的括号和号码间加空格，如 (86-10) 6505-2266。这是英文写作的规定格式。
ⅳ 写手机或者向别人通报手机时，也有一定的规范，要用4-3-4原则，如1380-105-6789
*教育背景
时间要倒序，最近的学历要放在最前面。
学历，可以把学历名称放在最前。
社会工作，担任班干部，只写职务就可以了
奖学金，一般用一句话概括。如果有多个，也争取用一句话概括。
*个人资料
无论是教育背景、工作经历，还是个人资料，既可以首字母大写，也可以全部字母大写，还可以全部字母小写。
语言
电脑
资格证书
*兴趣爱好
写强项、只写两到三项
*工作经历
首先要强调一下，对于正在工作的人，experience应写在education的前面，而对于在校生education则应放在experience之前。
*公司简介
对于新公司、小公司或招聘公司不甚熟悉的某些行业的公司，为了保险起见都不妨介绍一两句，
有些外国人可能对中国的公司不太知道，因此要介绍一下。长度以两行为宜。
*工作经历顺序
倒序，这是非常流行的方式。
技能类别，这主要是为了强调自己的某种技能
英文简历样本１（适合毕业生）-
room xxx building xxx
beijing university, beijing 100084
(010) 6******00 e-mail:good@beijing.edu.com
qin fang
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objective
to obtain a challenging position as software engineer with an emphasis in software design and development
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education
1997.9-2000.6 dept. automation, graduate school of beijing university, m.e.
1993.9-1997.7 dept. automation, beijing university, b.e.
academic main courses
mathematics:
advanced mathematics probability and statistics linear algebra
engineering mathematics numerical algorithm operational algorithm
electronics and computer
circuit principal data structures digital electronics
artificial intelligence computer local area network
computer abilities
skilled in use of ms frontpage, win 95/nt, SUN, Javabeans, html, cgi, java script, perl, distributed objects, corba, c, c , project 98, Office 97, rational requisitepro, process, pascal, pl/i and sql software.
english skills
have a good command of both spoken and written english. toefl:620
scholarships and awards
1999.3 jia chen award, the top honor given by beijing university
1998.11 metal machining practice award
1997.4 academic progress award
qualifications
general business knowledge relating to financial
have a passion for the internet, and an abundance of common sense
英文简历样本2 (适合有工作经验者)－
resume
personal information
family name: qin given name: fang
date of birth: july 10, 1975 birth place: beijing
sex: male marital status: unmarried
telephone: (010)6******00 pager: 600-1234567
e-mail: email@chinaemai.com
work experience:
nov. 1998- presents cics inc, as a director of software development and web publishing. organized and attended trade shows (comdex 99).
summer of 1997 ibm company as a technician, designed various web sites. designed and maintained the web site of our division independently from selecting suitable materials, content editing to designing web page by frontpage, Photoshop and java as well.
education:
1991 - august 1996 dept. automation, beijing university, b.e.
achievements & activities:
president and founder of the costumed committee
established the organization as a member of ibm
president of communications for the marketing association
representative in the student association
computer abilities:
skilled in use of ms frontpage, win 95/nt, sun, javabeans, html, cgi, java script, perl, distributed objects, corba, c, c , project 98, office 97, rational requisitepro, process, pascal, pl/i and sql software
english skills:
have a good command of both spoken and written english. toefl: 620
others:
aggressive, independent and be able to work under a dynamic environment. studious nature and dedication are my greatest strengths. have coordination skills, teamwork spirit.
一、说明应聘职位 stating your job objective
1、a responsible administrative position which will provide challenge and freedom where i can bring my initiative and creativity into full play.
负责管理的职位，该职位将提供挑战和自由，使我能充分发挥我的进取精神及创造能力。
2、an executive assistant position utilizing interests, training and experience in office administration.
行政助理的职位，能运用办公室管理方面的兴趣，训练与经验。
3、a position in management training programs with the eventual goal of participating in the management rank of marketing.
管理培训计划方面的职位。最终目标在参与市场管理层。
4、an entry-level position in sales. eventual goal; manager of marketing department.
销售方面的初级职位。最终目标：销售部门的经理。
5、a position requiring analytical skills in the financial or investment field.
财务或投资领域需运用分析技巧的职务。
6、to begin as an accounting trainee and eventually become a manager.
从当会计见习开始，最后成为经理。
7、an entry-level position in an accounting environment, which ultimately leads to financial management.
会计部门的初级职务，最后能够管理财务。
8、a position as data-processing manager that will enable me to use my knowledge of computer systems.
资料处理经理的职务，能保证我运用电脑系统的知识。
9、an entry-level position responsible for computer programming.
负责计算机程序设计的初级职务。
10 administrative assistant to an executive where short-hand and typing skills will be assets.
高级管理人员的行政助理，将用上速记和打字技能。
11、a position which will utilize my educational background in biology, with prospects of promotion.
谋求能运用我在生物学方面的学识，并有晋升前途的职位。
12、a position in charge of management training programs.
负责管理培训项目的职位。
13、responsible managerial position in human resources.
人力资源方面负责管理的职务。
14、a position in foreign trade department, with opportunities for advancement to management position in the department.
外贸部门的职位，有机会晋升到该部门的经理职务。
15、an administrative secretarial position where communication skills and a pleasant attitude toward people will be assets.
行政秘书的职务，用得上交际技巧和与人为善的态度。
16、a position as a design engineer in an engineering department.
工程部门设计工程师的职位。
17、looking for a position as a computer programmer with a medium-sized firm.
谋求一家中型公司的计算机程序员职位。
18、to serve as sales promoter in a multinational corporation with a view to promotion in position and assignment in parent companys branch abroad.
担任多国公司的推销员，期望在职位上有晋升并能分派到母公司的海外分公司去工作。
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二、说明教育程度 stating your education
1、useful courses for english-teaching include: psychology, teaching methodology,phonetics, rhetoric, grammar, composition.
对英语教学有用的课程包括：心理学、教学方法论、语音学、修辞学、语法、写作。
2、specialized courses pertaining to foreign trade: marketing principles, international marketing, practical english correspondence and telecommunications, foreign exchange, business english.
和外贸相关的专门课程：市场学原理、国际营销学、实用英语函电、外汇兑换、商务英语。
3、courses taken that would be useful for computer programming are: computer science, systems design and analysis, fortran programming, pascal programming, operating systems, systems management.
对计算机编程有用的课程有：计算机学、系统设计与分析、fortran编程学、pascal编程学、操作系统、系统管理。
4、academic preparation for management:
management:principles of management, organization theory, behavioral science.
communication: business communication, personnel management, human relations.
marketing: marketing theory, sales management.
大学时为管理所做的学术准备：
管理学：管理学原理、组织理论、行为学。
交际学：商务交际、人事管理、人际关系。
市场学：市场学理论、营销管理。
5、curriculum included: electric power systems, 90; signal processing, 88; systems and control, 92; electric energy systems, 92; solid-state electronics, 88; communications, 94.
课程包括：电力系统，90分；讯号处理，88分；系统控制，92分；电力能源系统，92分；固体电子学，88分；通讯，94分。
6、major courses contributing to management qualification: management, accounting, economics, marketing, sociology.
对管理资格有帮助的主要课程：管理学、会计学、经济学、市场学、社会学。
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三、说明工作经历 stating your work experience
1. sales manager. in addition to ordinary sales activities and management of department, responsible for recruiting and training of sales staff members.
销售部经理。除了正常销售活动和部门管理之外，还负责招聘与训练销售人员。
2. assistant to the general manager of shenzhen petrochemical industrial corporation ltd..handled the itinerary schedule of the general manager. met clients as a representative of the corporation. helped to negotiate a $5,000,000 deal for the corporation.
深圳石油化工集团股份有限公司总经理助理。安排总经理的出差旅行计划时间表。作为公司代表接见客户。协助公司谈成了一笔五百万美圆的交易。
3. secretary to president of silverlion group corporation ltd.. responsibilities: receiving visitors, scheduling meetings, taking and typing dictation, writing routine letters and reports.
银利来集团有限公司董事长秘书。职责：接待访客、安排会议、笔录并打字、书写日常信函及报告。
4. public relations girl at guangzhou holiday inn. full-time in summers, part-time during school.
在广州文化假日酒店当公关小姐。暑期全职，上课时间兼职。
5. assistant to manager of accounting department of a joint venture enterprise. analyzed data and relevant financial statistics, and produced monthly financial statements.
一家合资企业会计部门经理的助理。分析数据及相关财务统计数字，而且提出每月的财务报告。
6. worked 21 hours weekly as a salesgirl at the bookstore of shenzhen university. earned 45% of college expenses.
在深圳大学书店当售货员，每周工作21小时，砖了大学费用的45%。
7. production manager: initiated quality control resulting in a reduction in working hours by 20% while increasing productivity by 25%.
生产部经理：引入质量控制，使工作时数减少了20%，而生产力则提高了25%。
8.practical summer experience. clerked at one-and-one clothes store in charge of sales, 1992. employed at guangzhou restaurant as waitress, 1993.
暑期的实际经验。1992年，在一加一服装店当店员，负责销售。1993年，在广州酒家当侍应小姐。
9. staff member of shanxi textiles import and export company. handled import of textiles from hong kong, macao, taiwan. increased sales by 25% from 1990 to 1993. made frequent business trips to these places to negotiate with textile mills.
山西纺织品进出口公司职员。处理从香港、澳门、台湾进口纺织品事宜。从1990年到1993年增加了25%的销售额。经常出差到这些地方跟纺织厂商洽谈。
10. tourist guide during the summer vacation for beijing international travel service. conducted tours for foreign tourists on trip around the city.
暑假期间为北京国际旅行社当导游。负责外国旅客在城区的观光旅游。
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四、说明任职资格 stating your qualifications
1. university major in computer science, three years of part-time work in a computer software company.
在大学主修计算机科学，在计算机软件公司兼职三年。
2. experienced operator: word processor sv68, 60 wpm.
有经验的操作人员：文字处理机sv68型，每分钟60个单词。
3. educational background in business administration with a major in secretarial science and two summers of full-time work experience. working knowledge of all common office machines.
有工商管理的学历，主修秘书学，两年暑假的全职工作经验。对办公室所有常用机器有运用知识。
4. office skills include; operating english word processor and microcomputer, taking shorthand 85 wpm.
办公室工作技能包括：操作英文文字处理机及微型电子计算机、速记每分钟85个字。
5. four years of experience in marketing, in addition to a bachelors degree in management with major in marketing. like to be challenged with a responsible job.
除了主修市场学的管理学士学位，还有四年的市场营销经验。喜欢迎战责任重大的工作。
6. university education in management with an emphasis on accounting, involving the use of computers. able to comprehend financial statements.
在大学修管理学，以会计为主，包含电脑的使用。能理解财务报告。
7. ability to organize marketing campaigns and to supervise employees. effective communication abilities and public relations skills.
具有组织市场活动和督导员工的能力，并具有效的交际能力和公关技巧。
8. three years of successful job experience ranging from sales responsibilities to management of marketing department. adaptable, versatile, industrious.
三年的成功工作经验，范围从销售职责到市场部门的管理。适应性强、善变通、勤奋。
9. special training in accounting at guangdong college of commerce and three years of practical experience in accounting environment. enjoy working with people. responsible and reliable.
在广东商学院接受会计方面的专门培训，并有三年在会计部门的实际经验。喜欢和别人一同工作。负责可靠。
10. work experience in personnel affairs in a foreign capital enterprise coupled with educational background specialized in personnel management. maintain good human relations.
外资企业人事事务的工作经验，加上人事管理的专门学历背景。保持良好的人际关系。
11. five years working experience in teaching english at a middle school coupled with educational background specialized in english instruction at guangzhou teachers college. ability to listen and sensitivity to the needs of students.
有五年在中学进行英语教学的工作经验，加上在广州师范学院专攻英语教学的学历背景。能倾听学生意见，对学生的需求敏感。
12. good university education with japanese as my major combined with practical experience in translating business documents. worked as an interpreter in japan for a chinese investigation group for three months.
良好的大学教育，主修日语，加上翻译商务文件的实际经验。为中国考察团在日本当过三个月的译员。
